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Thursday, May 26, 2016

Narraitive

    We have been leaning how to write a narrative here is mine

Shipwreck


Long long ago there was a poor family who had a group of poor friends. They lived on an island with leafy trees. They ate fish for breakfast, morning tea, lunch time and dinner. They spent their day catching fish and enjoying the sun.


One day they saw a ship heading towards the island. They decided to prepare themselves and made traps out of weeds and leaves. The ship was getting closer. Suddenly smash it hit the shore…..
Boom Boom!!! guns shot everywhere from the ship. They came out with weapons and swords. FIGHT!!! The big challenge was on. They forced the pirates to their traps.


Suddenly crash!!! The pirates fell into the trap. “Hooray!” shouted the family and friends, “we got the Pirates!!!”
“Get us out, we will be good!” screamed the pirates.
“You promise,” said the concerned family and friends. “Yes, we promise,” shouted the pirates altogether.

So the family let them pirates go and they became friends. They all sailed back home on the pirates ship and lived happily ever after.

Monday, May 9, 2016

Visual Pepeha


This is my mountain to the sea picture. l drew my family and my mountains. l stuck on my river. I cut out the kete and glued it on and sketched my portrait on a blank piece of paper.

Swimming Assessment


Te Ahuahu Trip

Bump Bump “Are we there” I yelled. “Yes we are there” smiled Mrs Clarke. We rushed to the mountain. “Off you go!”shouted Mrs Whitelaw. “Hooray!” shouted the school. Stomp Stomp. Cow poop was everywhere!!!!! I saw dirty grass. I heard cars going vroom vroom. I heard kids going chatter chatter. Then a man arrived and told us a story about the grassy Te Ahu Ahu mountain.  
Finally it was time for lunch. Creep Creep. “Ahhhhhh!” screamed Piata. A big black spider was on her.  “It’s ok,” whispered Mrs Clarke. “Time to go now,” shouted Mrs Clarke.  Everybody ran down the grassy hill. The cows went moo moo. “Mrs Whitelaw, can I go on the bus?” I asked.  “Yes,” smiled Mrs Whitelaw.
“Yay!” I shouted. Vroomvroom. Off we went. I smiled.
Slam! The bus driver put the brakes on.  One of the parents voices echoed down the bus.
We’re at school. “Hi Sara,” announced Louisa.  “How did you get here?” I asked. “It’s a long story,” replied louisa. “Let’s play,” I screamed.
Ring ring!!!! I ran to class and jumped on the floor. It was time to go home.  “Bye Mrs Craig!” shouted the class.


I walked out of class. I felt sore and tired. I walked into the Library and sat down quietly.


      Slam! The bus driver put the brakes on.  One of the parents voices echoed down the bus.

We’re at school. “Hi Sara,” announced Louisa.  “How did you get here?” I asked. “It’s a long story,” replied louisa. “Let’s play,” I screamed.
Ring ring!!!! I ran to class and jumped on the floor. It was time to go home.  “Bye Mrs Craig!” shouted the class.

I walked out of class. I felt sore and tired. I walked into the Library and sat down quietly.
     



Pepeha


Here is my pepeha.