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Thursday, May 26, 2016

Narraitive

    We have been leaning how to write a narrative here is mine

Shipwreck


Long long ago there was a poor family who had a group of poor friends. They lived on an island with leafy trees. They ate fish for breakfast, morning tea, lunch time and dinner. They spent their day catching fish and enjoying the sun.


One day they saw a ship heading towards the island. They decided to prepare themselves and made traps out of weeds and leaves. The ship was getting closer. Suddenly smash it hit the shore…..
Boom Boom!!! guns shot everywhere from the ship. They came out with weapons and swords. FIGHT!!! The big challenge was on. They forced the pirates to their traps.


Suddenly crash!!! The pirates fell into the trap. “Hooray!” shouted the family and friends, “we got the Pirates!!!”
“Get us out, we will be good!” screamed the pirates.
“You promise,” said the concerned family and friends. “Yes, we promise,” shouted the pirates altogether.

So the family let them pirates go and they became friends. They all sailed back home on the pirates ship and lived happily ever after.

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