Hi my name is Alisi i’m from Wesley Primary School I really like the way you added a picture. This reminds me of when I wrote a story about Maui. Maybe next time you could make the picture a bit smaller. Come and visit my blog at http://wpsalisis.blogspot.co.nz/
Kia ora Sara. I like the way you have included an introduction, points to support your opinion, and a conclusion. I agree, Maui is the strongest and greatest Mythical hero. Next time you might like to include your own artwork as a picture. Can't wait to read your next piece of writing Sara. From Nicola (Sara's mum)
Hi my name is Alisi i’m from Wesley Primary School I really like the way you added a picture. This reminds me of when I wrote a story about Maui. Maybe next time you could make the picture a bit smaller. Come and visit my blog at http://wpsalisis.blogspot.co.nz/
ReplyDeleteKia ora Sara. I like the way you have included an introduction, points to support your opinion, and a conclusion. I agree, Maui is the strongest and greatest Mythical hero. Next time you might like to include your own artwork as a picture. Can't wait to read your next piece of writing Sara. From Nicola (Sara's mum)
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